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Tuesday, May 6, 2008

Outline for first draft

Outline

1) Introduction
*thesis statement: The unfolding news from BBC news has revealed the cruelty and neglect of pet owners and what has happened on the pets.

2) First paragraph
first support from BBC news “Owners warned over pet obesity

3) Second paragraph
second support from BBC news “Pet owner jailed for dog cruelty ”

4) Third paragraph
Objection from “Pet accessories on the rise

5) conclusion
Pet owners should be responsible for pet care.

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